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Post by Angeleia on Aug 6, 2004 14:33:14 GMT -5
ok, not sure how i feel about this one. it seemed anticlimatic compared to last week yet suggested far more. anyone else? Hit or Miss?
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Post by ladytass2001 on Aug 6, 2004 15:35:21 GMT -5
Actually being a long time reader of Sci-fi I found it very well written and very fresh. It catches the imagination and leads it forward which is what a good Sci-fi story is suppose to do.
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Post by MALCOLM XERXES™ on Aug 7, 2004 1:56:28 GMT -5
SAT. AUG. 7/2004/02:02 E.S.T.
LEIA,
Thank you for having taken the time to read TALES OF BUFFALO COMMONS™: “PARTITIONS”, & most especially for your candour.
For my own part, I found that I was rather intrigued by the cliffhanger ending & the Antagonist, whose overweening sense of self-importance made me eager to witness his demise @ the hands of a righteous nemesis.
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LADYTASS,
Your assessment is very gratifying to behold, for it is my hope that FINNEGAN’S SQUAD™ will appeal to SF readers as well as to SF (& non-SF) viewers.
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Post by First Leftenant on Aug 7, 2004 10:10:55 GMT -5
I LOVE THIS STORY! I just read it again. Congress in a box. Fantastic! No offence but this was way better than last weeks! Finn rocks!
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Post by MALCOLM XERXES™ on Aug 8, 2004 3:01:14 GMT -5
I LOVE THIS STORY! I just read it again. Congress in a box. Fantastic! No offence but this was way better than last weeks! Finn rocks! SUN. AUG. 8/2004/03:07 E.S.T.
FIRST LEFTENANT,
“No offence” was taken. Glad you liked it.
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Post by Miss Kitka on Aug 8, 2004 8:18:11 GMT -5
Yes, it is *hard* to choose between eye candy and brain stimulation. Best when both are combined, eh Malcolm?
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Post by MALCOLM XERXES™ on Aug 8, 2004 11:14:49 GMT -5
Yes, it is *hard* to choose between eye candy and brain stimulation. Best when both are combined, eh Malcolm? SUN. AUG. 8/2004/11:20 E.S.T.
MS. KITKA,
It has been my own experience that “hardness” results from “brain stimulation” caused by “eye candy”, so, yes, I grok the fullness of the totality!
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Post by MALCOLM XERXES™ on Aug 8, 2004 12:28:18 GMT -5
ok, not sure how i feel about this one. it seemed anticlimatic compared to last week yet suggested far more. anyone else? Hit or Miss? SUN. AUG. 8/2004/12:34 E.S.T.
LEIA,
TOPPER posted this reply to another individual who had voiced similar concerns to your own:Glad you enjoyed the story. We will be posting the rest of it shortly but weren't able to by Friday due to a series of repeating, and very annoying computer problems throughout the week. Which brings me to next Friday. The Buffalo Commons story wasn't intended for this last week as the final leg of the story hasn't been finished yet but what was was planned this last week ** disappeared ** early Thursday morning. We rushed to recover it but by 2:00 am realized it wasn't going to happen in time and so went with plan "B". Rest assured, if we post a story, we will provide some conclusion. Even though the "TALES OF BUFFALO COMMONS" book is a series of semi-intertwined short stories, each one will stand on their own and we plan to post many of them on-line in the weeks to come!
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Post by Miss Kitka on Aug 8, 2004 17:47:04 GMT -5
SUN. AUG. 8/2004/12:34 E.S.T.
The Buffalo Commons story wasn't intended for this last week as the final leg of the story hasn't been finished yet but what was was planned this last week ** disappeared ** early Thursday morning.
MX, Disappeared? Sounds suspicious. Maybe Topper was the victim of shadow operations!
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Post by MALCOLM XERXES™ on Aug 8, 2004 17:59:14 GMT -5
MX, Disappeared? Sounds suspicious. Maybe Topper was the victim of shadow operations! WED. AUG. 4/2004/18:05 E.S.T.
MS. KITKA,
If so, then Information Management™ will get to the bottom of things, I have no doubt.
...Unless...it was their operation!
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Post by ladytass2001 on Aug 8, 2004 19:55:22 GMT -5
Well if it was information management then I didn't hear anything about it which means it would been a *shadow*op
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Post by MALCOLM XERXES™ on Aug 9, 2004 8:10:57 GMT -5
Well if it was information management then I didn't hear anything about it which means it would been a *shadow*op MON. AUG. 9/2004/08:17 E.S.T.
LADYTASS,
That would suggest to me that the information was being managed by persons other than yourself.
POST SCRIPTUM: Your current tint of green is far easier to read than the previous 1.
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Post by Sirona on Aug 10, 2004 9:34:46 GMT -5
Sir, That breech now falls under security. I believe Sergeant Major Anais Diego is not at fault, she was only obeying orders. However, I will double the sweeps to ensure that this doesn't happen, Sir
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Post by MALCOLM XERXES™ on Aug 10, 2004 11:47:58 GMT -5
Sir, That breech now falls under security. I believe Sergeant Major Anais Diego is not at fault, she was only obeying orders. However, I will double the sweeps to ensure that this doesn't happen, Sir TUE. AUG. 10/2004/11:54 E.S.T.
SIRONA,
I concur with your assessment about SERGEANT-MAJOR DIEGO’S judgement in the situation.
Your ongoing diligence is much appreciated.
POST SCRIPTUM: Lovely choice of font colour, if I may say so!
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Post by ladytass2001 on Aug 10, 2004 13:16:00 GMT -5
Well I agree the other shade of green was ...too dark for the board..I like the lighter shade and I also like the color Sirona is using it is very complimentary to the board colors
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